Hello Christopher. Thank you for your review!
About new chapter with brief description of code structure: OK, I will add it. I will submit the new version of proposal draft with this chapter tomorrow at 19 p.m. UTC.
About C++ experience: At Intel I work on restricted project and due to Intel policy I can not tell more than I work at software and service group. I can add only that my responsibility at Intel is C++ programming and I am profound user of c++. Is that enough?
Maybe say something about how the experience at Intel has provided you with the opportunity to gain practical experience in C++ programming in a professional environment. (As I assume this is correct.)
About proposal at Google's melange site: OK, I will add numbers to formula in my PDF proposal and start to make text proposal at Google's melange site.
That all sounds good. Good work so far and good luck with your proposal. Sincerely, Chris.